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I am proud of this because I tried my best.
In my story I included punctuation, COP and I hooked the reader.
The Hole Of Fear
One day Jack and his mum went to Te Mata Peak for a hour walk Jack thou'rt it would be a good idea to scary his mum so he looked at the ground and saw that there was a big hole in the ground and a yellow dusty fence was on top of the hole.so when he hooped in BOOM!! Jack went falling to an underground prison and the prisoners wanted Jack to help him to escape but Jack said NO so the monsters trap Jack in a corner. Picked him up and threw him into a cave.that had spiders running on the ceiling with ants on there back.Jack was so terrified and cold it felt like a ice storm.
The next day a huge monster called Jeff Had so much confidence to take out his soul and control him for his crib to escape. Jack's mum missed Jack so much she need to go find him so she did. he went looking past the ground because she new that he would be finding from her. The hours went pasts but she found nothing.There was just one thing that clutched her eye. It was shiny so her slowly approached it because the sun was reflecting into her eyes when she finally
Got there she picked it up and she remembered that it was his necklines she
thought that he got kidnapped she saw footsteps and followed it until she found
Miss Faulkner saw the hole and throat that he is definitely down there so she hopped
In just like Mario she looked and around and said WHERE IS HE!!! She fell to her knees and started to cry as soon she stared Jack yelled out MUM and she yelled
Out Jack. Jack says they've got me. Miss Faulkner said wait I am coming she run into the
Cave grub Jack before the monster pulled out Jacks soul. Her pit Jack on her shoulder run up the hole because there was a ladder there for when to climb up
Whey had to put the fence back on top because the monster where following
Them as soon they go out they had a long hug are carried on in there lives and forget all about it.
By IsaiahThank You For Reading