Tuesday, November 17, 2015

Letter to editor - Week 6

i was learning to use my success criteria
I blogged this because this is my favorite witieing


Success Criteria

  • state your opinion on the topic
  • give a couple of examples that match your opinion
  • purpose is to convince
  • short and to the point
  • start with ‘dear editor’ and finish with ‘sincerely…’
  • no waffling
  • my writing goal:Add detail to ideas





Dear Editor


All kids over 14 and over should be allowed to drive a car. All the kids that are 14 and over walk to school and if they were allowed to drive there would be less accidents because kids around. It would also mean that kids would get less tired from walking everywhere. They would just drive a car.


Yours sincerely,
Isaiah

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